2024年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2024年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二写作冲刺教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the survey about main gains among students attending labor practice courses in a certain university. Acquiring relevant knowledge takes the lead at 91.3%, followed by improving practical skills at 84.8%. Additionally, factors such as telling relaxed and enhancing cooperative ability are also considered, accounting for 54.4% and 32.6%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our university have made tremendous efforts to organize a series of practical courses, enabling students to not only acquire relevant knowledge, but improve practical skills. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, attending these innovative and meaningful courses has emerged as their significant choice for not only utilising leisure time, but acquire knowledge or improve practical skills. Considering the factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：telling

批改：feeling

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the survey about main gains among students attending labor practice courses in a certain university. Acquiring relevant knowledge takes the lead at 91.3%, followed by improving practical skills at 84.8%. Additionally, factors such as telling relaxed and enhancing cooperative ability are also considered, accounting for 54.4% and 32.6%, respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：university

批改：复数

原文：acquire

批改：和前面的utilizing形式保持一致，改成acquiring

原文：improve

批改：improving

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our university have made tremendous efforts to organize a series of practical courses, enabling students to not only acquire relevant knowledge, but improve practical skills. In addition, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, attending these innovative and meaningful courses has emerged as their significant choice for not only utilising leisure time, but acquire knowledge or improve practical skills. Considering the factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of university students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，介词后加动词ing形式。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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