考研英语一2025年大作文失分点批改

2025年考研英语一大作文是启航考研英语备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

The table clearly depicts the consumptions" owners of our country"s presidents in recent years. In 2014, the number of airconditions was 75.2, but by 2023, this figure has substantially risen to 145.9. In the meanwhile, the number of washing machines experienced a significant increase ouan

about 4.5-. Simultaneously, the number of bridges also increase about 17.9. The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1900s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of our country"s people, serving as microcosm of the changes in the cera, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：presidents

批改：residents是居民，应该是每一百户，即：per 100 households

原文：ouan

批改：去掉

原文：airconditions

批改：air-conditioners

原文： increase

批改：had an increase

原文：The table clearly depicts the consumptions" owners of our country"s presidents in recent years. In 2014, the number of airconditions was 75.2, but by 2023, this figure has substantially risen to 145.9. In the meanwhile, the number of washing machines experienced a significant increase ouan about 4.5-. Simultaneously, the number of bridges also increase about 17.9.

批改：对图画中的细节描述的很全面，但是要避免小的语言问题。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1900s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of our country"s people, serving as microcosm of the changes in the cera, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能对未来趋势进行预测与分析，与作文主题相符。

原文：cera

批改：area

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误以及注意区分词性；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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