2014年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

备战2014年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicts the changes of urban and rural population in twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million , but by 2010, the figure had substantially rise to 666 million.In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote urban development,attracting more young people. In addition,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china’s economy in responding to these changes. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of rural population will steadily decline in the following decades. In contrast,the number of urban population will likely continue to increase.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ise

批改：risen

原文：ulation was 300 million , but by 2010, the figure had substantially rise to 666 million.In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：第一段写的不错，描述图表比较清楚准确，句子结构符合英文写作特点。

原文：b

批改：前面加the

原文：c

批改：大写

原文：ctor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote urban development,attracting more young people. In addition,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china’s economy in responding to these changes. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：内容比较丰富和详尽，句子结构没啥大的问题，分点写比较有逻辑性。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法上注意时态，现在完成时的写法需要注意，大小写。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，读起来比较通顺。

词汇：单词整体比较好，继续保持。

内容：结构比较好，内容比较贴合图表主题，分析比较到位，比较有深度。

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