2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2014年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二作文真题常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the population of city and the population of village from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city population was 3000, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. Meanwhile, the number of village population experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound life system, enabling people to have ample opportunities to enjoy in the city. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances , area is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of village population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：3000

批改：300million，有单位，注意加上单位

原文：666

批改：后加million

原文：160

批改：后加million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the population of city and the population of village from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city population was 3000, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. Meanwhile, the number of village population experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

批改：注意图表中数字有单位一定要加上单位

原文：area

批改：这里是不是没写完整？

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound life system, enabling people to have ample opportunities to enjoy in the city. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances , area is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，内容完整

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of village population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇掌握的很好；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，如果图表中数字有单位记得加上单位。再接再厉。

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