考研英语一2025年大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2025年考研英语一大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循启航考研英语高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

写作B节 52.

This table orderly arranges the information concerning the average number of main durable consumptions owned by every 100 households across the country, from 2014 to 2023. Over this decade, ownership of air conditions, washing machines and refrigerators (including freezers) saw a significant increase. In 2014, there were 75.2 air conditioners, 83.7 washing machines, and 85,5 refrigerators per 100 household. By 2023, the number of them are 145.9、 98.2 and 103.4.

Among the three types of household appliances, the growth rate of air conditioners has reached an astonishing almost 100%. As global warning intensifies, the annual average temperature keeps rising, hence people need more air conditioners to regulate indoor temperature. However, this practice will worsen the situation of global warning, which has already become a climate difficulty

From my perspective, this set of data remirds us that we should cultivate a good habit of saving electricity and adopt a low-carbon lifestyle.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：conditions

批改：conditioners

原文：This table orderly arranges the information concerning the average number of main durable consumptions owned by every 100 households across the country, from 2014 to 2023. Over this decade, ownership of air conditions, washing machines and refrigerators (including freezers) saw a significant increase. In 2014, there were 75.2 air conditioners, 83.7 washing machines, and 85,5 refrigerators per 100 household. By 2023, the number of them are 145.9、 98.2 and 103.4.

批改：对图画中的细节描述的很全面。

原文：warning

批改：warming

原文：warning

批改：warming

原文：Among the three types of household appliances, the growth rate of air conditioners has reached an astonishing almost 100%. As global warning intensifies, the annual average temperature keeps rising, hence people need more air conditioners to regulate indoor temperature. However, this practice will worsen the situation of global warning, which has already become a climate difficulty

批改：如果能够论述是因为人们生活水平提升能够负担得起这些昂贵家用电器会更符合题意

原文：remirds

批改：reminds

原文：From my perspective, this set of data remirds us that we should cultivate a good habit of saving electricity and adopt a low-carbon lifestyle

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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