2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二写作技巧每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2014年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in urban and rural populations in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 150 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural inhabitants to have ample opportunities for finding jobs. In addition, as the saying goes, " On life"s stage, pressure is always present. " Nowadays, rural residents are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and a result, moving to cities has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：20

批改：建议前面加上the past，表达更准确

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in urban and rural populations in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 150 million during the same period.

批改：对图标内容描述准确，表达清晰

原文： a

批改：前面要加as，as a result表示因此

原文：depicts

批改：这里要用形容词depicted

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural inhabitants to have ample opportunities for finding jobs. In addition, as the saying goes, " On life"s stage, pressure is always present. " Nowadays, rural residents are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and a result, moving to cities has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：从政策和压力两个方面说明了图表中的现象，注意个别语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：表达个人观点，总结全文，表述通顺

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13

题目要求：对图表信息描绘准确，个人观点及论述部分符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多的范围原句和模板句，语法错误较少，表达效果较好，但平时练习也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段详细论述，第三段表达个人观点，整体架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续多多积累经典句式；注意个别语法问题；

整体来说很好了，继续保持~

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