考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2017年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一写作冲刺教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

a m Portroyed inthe two carlins in a thoust provoking cntust. In the lest pitte crod suts contertedly in front of with boks, yet none of them has hen opres inthe right one, another boy wath only a single vlune on hisdek, resoutehy writes down his plan: "Pingh 20 boohg thes year." The caption reads, Ouning books versus reading then.)

The imolication is crystil-clowr moe possession ofresomca is meaningles, without determined actiog, In an era when infrmathy is cheap and self spacess awotinjouie, what out in the scinlime to convont potentsul knowlege into actidl growth. A plan without exacntin is day treaming. ethth witha plan toms puses inte poorer.

There fore we shodd stop meusuring ounel by by what we have and state measuring what we do; set a quantifiable toget, by it into daslystens. and truck proyress terelentelessly.

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：a m Portroyed inthe two carlins in a thoust provoking cntust. In the lest pitte crod suts contertedly in front of with boks, yet none of them has hen opres inthe right one, another boy wath only a single vlune on hisdek, resoutehy writes down his plan: "Pingh 20 boohg thes year." The caption reads, Ouning books versus reading then.) The imolication is crystil-clowr moe possession ofresomca is meaningles, without determined actiog, In an era when infrmathy is cheap and self spacess awotinjouie, what out in the scinlime to convont potentsul knowlege into actidl growth. A plan without exacntin is day treaming. ethth witha plan toms puses inte poorer. There fore we shodd stop meusuring ounel by by what we have and state measuring what we do; set a quantifiable toget, by it into daslystens. and truck proyress terelentelessly. komemhor; on unreal book is merel decotod pypar, but a finshad box becomes a tuick in the munsin of our msy Action, not ownerships, tronsfinss potential in powol

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