2014年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2014年考研英语二大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart above explicitly displays the change of population in China"s urban and countryside from 1990 to 2010. It is clearly indicated that the urban population ascended mildly from 300 million to 666 million during this period of time, which, on the contrary, witnessed the steep descent of the countryside population from 834 million to 674 million.

First of all, there is no doubt that with the quick pace of urbanization, more and more rural residents felt necessary to come to cities for working, which consequently led to this phenomenon. Furthermore, owing to the dense atmosphere of mass entrepreneurship in urban of people , who put more emphasis on starting a business which could be easily achieved, through the change of population in China"s urban and countryside.

We can draw a safe conclusion, from the analysis made above, that this trend will surely continue in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. As far as I am concerned, it is my sincere hope that the population in urban will continue to grow, so that we can enjoy the benefits brought by the advance and revolution.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rb

批改：city

原文：, which, on the contrary,

批改：不建议这样写，time后句号，On the contrary, the number of rural population

原文：of the countryside population

批改：删掉

原文： the change of population in China"s urban and countryside from 1990 to 2010. It is clearly indicated that the urban population ascended mildly from 300 million to 666 million during this period of time, which, on the contrary, witnessed the steep descent of the countryside population from 834 million t

批改：第一段描述 图表还是比较到位的，数据清楚明确，句子结构比较合理，注意一些小错误

原文：elt

批改：feel，用一般现在时即可

原文：ed

批改：leads

原文： ,

批改：不用逗号

原文：ba

批改：urban是adj，countryside是名词，and连接的前后词语词性要一致，urban改为city

原文：ace of urbanization, more and more rural residents felt necessary to come to cities for working, which consequently led to this phenomenon. Furthermore, owing to the dense atmosphere of mass entrepreneurship in urban of people , who put more emphasis on starting a business which could be easily achieved, through the change of population in China"s urban and coun

批改：内容还是可以的，句子结构比较符合英文写作要求，注意一些小错误哦

原文：ba

批改：urban areas

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法注意时态哦，用一般现在时或者现在完成时即可，除非有明确的时间状语，注意词性的区分，adj，名词都有不一样的表达哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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