2015年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2015年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二作文范文话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart above explicitly displays the proportion of the Spring Festival holiday spending of residents in a certain city. It is clearly indicated that residents buy New Year gifts account for 40% during the Spring Festival , meanwhile, having a dinner together, transportation and others each account for 20%.

First of all, there is no doubt that with the notable improvement of living conditions, residents are able to have a plentiful holiday, which consequently leads to this phenomenon. Furthermore, owing to the remarkable change in consumption, residents attach more importance to enhancing relationship with relatives and friends, which could be largely achieved through such spending.

We can draw a safe conclusion , from the analysis made above , that this phenomenon will surely continue in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. Even though residents spend a lot on New Year gifts, such a spending of residents in the Spring Festival is always preferable and praiseworthy as long as people can be happy with it.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Spring Festival holiday spending of residents

批改：spendings of residents in Spring Festival holiday

原文：account

批改：改成非谓语accounting

原文：The pie chart above explicitly displays the proportion of the Spring Festival holiday spending of residents in a certain city. It is clearly indicated that residents buy New Year gifts account for 40% during the Spring Festival , meanwhile, having a dinner together, transportation and others each account for 20%.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：First of all, there is no doubt that with the notable improvement of living conditions, residents are able to have a plentiful holiday, which consequently leads to this phenomenon. Furthermore, owing to the remarkable change in consumption, residents attach more importance to enhancing relationship with relatives and friends, which could be largely achieved through such spending.

批改：能够对图表内容进行论述分析，语言较为连贯。

原文：We can draw a safe conclusion , from the analysis made above , that this phenomenon will surely continue in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. Even though residents spend a lot on New Year gifts, such a spending of residents in the Spring Festival is always preferable and praiseworthy as long as people can be happy with it.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的正确，多个名词罗列时可以使用of所有格结构；语法方面，注意一句话只能有一个谓语。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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