2025年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2025年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二写作冲刺备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the main daily leisure activities of the elderly in the community. Wth ing TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by walking at 68.3%. Addi tionally, factors such as painting folwer, reading and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"sare no longer content with mere material satisfaction, they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose different type activities. In addition, as we all know order the order generation, particularly those born in the 1950s and 1960s. are accustomed to using TV and have become the primary watcher. Considering these fators, the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trend? I am confident that the above statisticl figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of order people

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in the community

批改：某社区 改为 in a certain community

原文：Wth ing

批改：Watching

原文：painting folwer

批改：养花 最合适的表达为 gardening

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：people"s

批改：此处为主语，直接写为 people

原文：,

批改：逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，改为 ；

原文：know

批改：加逗号

原文：order the order generation

批改：改为 the elderly

批改：改为 逗号

原文：using

批改：改为 watching

原文：different type activities

批改：改为 different types of activities

原文：watcher

批改：改为 group

批改：内容表达不错，但是建议每个原因的分析都要和图表元素结合起来，此处分析了看电视，此外，还可以从散步的角度进行分析，可参考范文

原文： trend

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 trends

原文：statisticl

批改：statistical

原文：order

批改：older

原文：people

批改：后面要补充完整，改为……，serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较具体，但是建议每个原因的分析都要和图表元素结合起来

修改建议：1. 语法和内容表达问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心 3. 每个原因的分析都要和图表元素结合起来，总的来说写的不错，注意以上问题，继续加油！

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