2025年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the main daily activities of the elderly in the community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by take a stroll at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as reading books, raising flowers and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 31.8%, 34.7% and 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a variety of parks, enabling the elderly to take walks more conveniently. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the elderly generation, are accustomed to watching TV and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted

phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of elderly serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：take

批改：by是介词，改成taking

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the main daily activities of the elderly in the community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by take a stroll at 68.3%. Additionally, factors such as reading books, raising flowers and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 31.8%, 34.7% and 18.4%, respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：,

批改：不需要加逗号

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a variety of parks, enabling the elderly to take walks more conveniently. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the elderly generation, are accustomed to watching TV and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

批改：加逗号断句

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of elderly serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，介词后加动词ing形式；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，注意正确使用标点断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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