考研英语一2010年大作文失分点批改

本文整理了2010年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

The cartoon provides us with a socially symbolic scene: there is a boiling hot pot, filled with many cultural elements, such as Peking Opera, Lao She, Bi Sheng, kung fu and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is multicultural integrations that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and society.

This phenomenon is though-provoking in several ways, but three of them are particularly significant . First and foremost, not only does attaching importance to multicultural integrations promote cultural identity, but it also enables us to inherit and develop the traditional culture. What"s more, no one can deny such an obvious fact that cultural exchange plays a crucial role in the promotion of cultural diversity. At last, multicultural integrations are the foundation upon which we promote the vigorous development and prosperity of Chinese culture.

All in all, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that multicultural integrations have become an irresistible trend of our time. For one thing, by no means should we give up our efforts to carry forward the quintessence of traditional Chinese culture. For another , we ought to learn and incorporate what is best in western culture with an open mind. In this way , hopefully, Chinese culture may have a better future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The cartoon provides us with a socially symbolic scene: there is a boiling hot pot, filled with many cultural elements, such as Peking Opera, Lao She, Bi Sheng, kung fu and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is multicultural integrations that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and society.

批改：对漫画内容的描述很全面，个人观点切题，表达流畅

原文：though

批改：thought

原文：This phenomenon is though-provoking in several ways, but three of them are particularly significant . First and foremost, not only does attaching importance to multicultural integrations promote cultural identity, but it also enables us to inherit and develop the traditional culture. What"s more, no one can deny such an obvious fact that cultural exchange plays a crucial role in the promotion of cultural diversity. At last, multicultural integrations are the foundation upon which we promote the vigorous development and prosperity of Chinese culture.

批改：从三方面论证文化融合的意义，表达通顺，注意个别 单词拼写

原文：All in all, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that multicultural integrations have become an irresistible trend of our time. For one thing, by no means should we give up our efforts to carry forward the quintessence of traditional Chinese culture. For another , we ought to learn and incorporate what is best in western culture with an open mind. In this way , hopefully, Chinese culture may have a better future.

批改：总结上文，呼应论点，语言表达清晰

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19

题目要求：对漫画内容描绘准确，个人观点及论述内容也符合题意；

语言表达：全文仅少量借鉴了范文，通篇基本没有语法问题，整体表达通顺，条理清晰，但要注意个别拼写问题；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容并表达个人观点，第二段分条展开详细论述，第三段表达个人观点并总结全文，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文拼写错误；保持日常写作练习；

整体上完成得很不错，继续保持哦~

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