考研英语一2010年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2010年考研英语一高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As show in the cartoon,there"s a hot pot,having fume,and filled with some traditions which include Kong fu,Ru and so on.Evidently,the cartoonist intent to convey to reader that it is good traditions that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.What is more,while certain traditions may be outdated,most of them are what should nerve lost their luster,as they are essential bond that kept world,s nation thriving.On the other hand,traditions can ignite our creativity,and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making left rewarding and meamingful,rather than being self-consuming.

In brief,traditions is the catalyst for society and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit.therefore,we should actively support and advocate them and carry forward traditional culture.only by diong so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Ru

批改：儒家是the Confucianists

原文：intent

批改：intends

原文：reader

批改：复数readers

原文：As show in the cartoon,there"s a hot pot,having fume,and filled with some traditions which include Kong fu,Ru and so on.Evidently,the cartoonist intent to convey to reader that it is good traditions that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：其实图片中不仅仅有中国的传统文化，还有国外的优秀文化，所以主题词更建议选取：excellent culture或cultural fusion

原文：What is more

批改：这里应该是第一点，可以用on the one hand

原文：nerve

批改：never

原文：lost

批改：改成动词lose

原文：kept

批改：用现在时就可以

原文：world,s nation

批改：our nation and world

原文：left

批改：life

原文：meamingful

批改：meaningful

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.What is more,while certain traditions may be outdated,most of them are what should nerve lost their luster,as they are essential bond that kept world,s nation thriving.On the other hand,traditions can ignite our creativity,and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment,thus making left rewarding and meamingful,rather than being self-consuming.

批改：论述的内容较为全面，运用逻辑关系词使得句与句之间衔接较为紧密。注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：traditions

批改：更换主题词

原文：therefore

批改：T大写

原文：traditional culture

批改：excellent culture

原文：only

批改：Only首字母大写

原文：diong

批改：doing

原文：n brief,traditions is the catalyst for society and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit.therefore,we should actively support and advocate them and carry forward traditional culture.only by diong so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/20

论述全面，逻辑清晰，字数符合作文的要求，值得表扬，希望能够注意以下的小问题。

词汇方面：注意避免单词拼写错误，基础词汇要确保写对，对于不熟悉的词汇平时需要多加练习，注意正确区分词性以及词性之间的修饰关系，还要注意名词单复数的正确。

语法方面：注意时态的正确选取。

内容方面：要注意主题词的恰当选取。

其他细节：一句话开头的单词首字母要大写。

希望能够发扬写作的优点，避免以上的问题。继续加油，再接再厉。

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