2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the percentage of some brands among car market in china in 2008 and 2009. In 2008,

the percentage of chinese brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had gradually risen to around 30%.In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a slow decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously,the percentage of american brand remain stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress

made by china"s car manufacturing industry in

responding to these changes. In addition

against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and

dynamic development, the younger generation,

particularly those born in the and 1980s and 1990s,are accustomed to driving domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand will likely continue to decrease

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：among car market in china

批改：in the Chinese car market

原文： chinese brand

批改：Chinese brands

原文： brand

批改：brands

原文：american brand

批改：American brands

原文：remain

批改：remained 一般过去时态

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the percentage of some brands among car market in china in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of chinese brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had gradually risen to around 30%.In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a slow decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously,the percentage of american brand remain stable and steady.

批改：信息较为清晰

原文： china"s

批改：首字母大写China"s

原文：addition

批改：后面加逗号

原文：car

批改：cars

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s car manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. In addition against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the and 1980s and 1990s,are accustomed to driving domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：词汇和句型丰富，注意排版

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：brand

批改：brands

原文：brand

批改：brands

原文：decrease

批改：结尾用句号

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，排版需要再清晰些；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，但拼写和标点错误较多，注意改正；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多学习老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，内化为自己的语料，应对不同类型的写作题目，加油！

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