考研英语一2025年大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2025年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语一作文范文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

The table cearly depicts the number of the main durable products that per hundred residents averagely have in the whole country in recent year. In 2014, the number of air condition was 75.2, but by the 2023, this figure had substantially visen to 148.9. Meanwhile, the number of washing machine experienced an increase. of 14.5 during the same period. Simultaneously, the number of fridge also got an increase of 17.9.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government had made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing then to afford these durable products that were previously deemed luxury ltems. In addition, Chinese society was undergoing an extensine and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon was the significant progress made by China"s mannfactwring industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in te table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of these durable products will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：cearly

批改：cearly -> clearly

原文：air condition

批改：air condition 应为 air conditioners

原文：by the 2023

批改：by the 2023 应为 by 2023（年份前通常不加冠词）

原文：visen

批改：risen

原文：washing machine

批改：washing machine 应为复数 washing machines

原文：fridge

批改：fridge 较口语化，建议统一为 refrigerator

原文：got an increase of

批改：increased by更好哦

原文：The table cearly depicts the number of the main durable products that per hundred residents averagely have in the whole country in recent year. In 2014, the number of air condition was 75.2, but by the 2023, this figure had substantially visen to 148.9. Meanwhile, the number of washing machine experienced an increase. of 14.5 during the same period. Simultaneously, the number of fridge also got an increase of 17.9.

批改：本段准确地把握了趋势和品类，图表描述是客观事实的呈现，数据的完整性和语言的准确性是底线。

原文：then

批改：then -> them

原文：made

批改：had made 过去完成时使用不当，这里描述一个持续到现在的努力或一般事实，应用现在完成时 has made 或一般现在时 makes

原文： extensine

批改：extensine -> extensive

原文：mannfactwring

批改：mannfactwring -> manufacturing

原文：was undergoing

批改：was undergoing 和 was 均为一般过去时，但描述社会转型和制造业进步这些持续状态，应用现在时或现在完成时更佳。

原文：te

批改：te 拼写错误 -> the

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government had made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing then to afford these durable products that were previously deemed luxury ltems. In addition, Chinese society was undergoing an extensine and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon was the significant progress made by China"s mannfactwring industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in te table is unsurprising.

批改：本段构建从“政府/经济”到“制造业”的分析链条，方向正确，且第二个原因（制造业）触及了供给侧的关键，有一定深度。好的分析需要准确的语言和清晰的逻辑来支撑。你有不错的分析视角

原文：What about future trends?

批改：Looking ahead, this trend is likely to continue.更正式

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of these durable products will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：结尾段过于简短，只是一个简单的预测。作为总结，它可以更有力地概括前文，并给出一个基于分析的、稍具体的展望。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

你对图表作文有基本的结构意识，并能从经济和产业角度进行思考，第二段的分析角度（制造业进步）有一定价值。请继续加油

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