2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population both in urban and rural cities in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decrease of 160 million.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents have ample opportunities to find jobs in ourban city. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue a higher quality of life. This explains why an increasing number of people choose urban life. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in following decades. In contrast, the rural population will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：an and rural cit

批改：“in urban and rural cities” 表述不当，“rural cities” 矛盾，建议改为 “in urban and rural areas”。

原文：e number of rural po

批改：“the number of urban population” 搭配不当，应为 “the urban population”。

原文：ecrease of 160 m

批改：decrease of 160 million” 建议改为 “decrease of 160 million” 或 “fell by 160 million”

原文：e bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population both in urban and rural cities in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decrease of 160 million.

批改：你准确地描述了图表中最核心的数据变化，很好！并且使用了 “in contrast” 这样的衔接词，使对比非常清晰。

原文：nabling rural re

批改：“enabling rural residents have” 语法错误，应为 “enabling rural residents to have”。

原文：urban city. I

批改：“ourban city” 拼写错误，应为 “urban cities”。

原文：the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system, enabling rural residents have ample opportunities to find jobs in ourban city. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue a higher quality of life. This explains why an increasing number of people choose urban life. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon is unsurprising.

批改：本段结构很棒！用 “The core reason...”, “To start with...”, “In addition...” 分层论述，逻辑很清楚。提出的两个原因（政府就业政策、人们追求更好生活）也非常切题且有力

原文：ural population will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：最后一句 “decrease relatively stable” 语法不通，副词不能修饰动词“decrease”。建议改为 “continue to decrease at a relatively stable rate” 或 “experience a steady decline”。

原文：hat about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in following decades. In contrast, the rural population will likely continue to decrease relatively stabl

批改：你对未来趋势做出了明确的预测，很好地完成了题目的要求

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

总评与修改建议：

你的作文结构完整，逻辑清晰，尤其第二段的原因分析层层递进，体现了很好的思辨能力。主要的失分点在于一些语法和词汇搭配的准确性，比如 enable sb to do 的固定搭配、urban population 的直接使用等。

给你最核心的建议是：在保证观点清晰的同时，要追求语法和用词的精确。 可以多积累一些图表作文的常用表达和固定搭配，写完后再通读一遍，检查这些“技术性”细节。保持这个清晰的思路，再打磨一下语言，你的分数一定能更上一层楼！

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