2019年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2019年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

What a vivid column chart it is ! It exhibits a far-reaching phenomenon. The graduated students,in a college, who received the bachalor degree prefered to look for a job which accounted for 68.1 percent in 2013, but this statistics was dropped to 60.7 percent. The desire of enhancing the degree was boosted from 26.3 percent to 34 percent. Starting a business which was rised slightly.

This phenemenon serves to remind us the fact that more and more students believe that the job participation isn"t the only decision after the graduation,they can also choose to achieve a greater education or starting a business. Here are my private perspectives.

First and foremost, the Reform and Opening up policy plays a significant role in routine decisions,because of economy development,our residents won"t under the pressure of earning the living and they can spend more resource on education. Furthermore, the science and technology are developing in our society which means that the requirement of the career desires for a well-educated freshman. This will force the students to achieve a higher skill. In the end, under the broadcast of social media, people won"t see the job participation as the highest order which represents a deeper view in lifetime.

To put all into a nutshell, our students are demanding a higher education,this will increase the productivity of our society and benefit us a lot in life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：column

批改：柱状图应该用 bar

原文：,

批改：多余，应删除

原文：bachalor

批改：bachelor

原文：, who received the bachalor degree

批改：前面已经说了毕业生，这里比较多余，应删除

原文：prefered

批改：preferred

原文：job

批改：后加逗号

原文：accounted

批改：同前文，一般现在时为accounts

原文：statistics

批改： 表统计数据时单数用 statistic

原文：was

批改：多余，应删除

原文：which

批改：多余，应删除

原文：was rised

批改：rise无被动语态，应该为过去时rose

原文：What a vivid column chart it is ! It exhibits a far-reaching phenomenon. The graduated students,in a college, who received the bachalor degree prefered to look for a job which accounted for 68.1 percent in 2013, but this statistics was dropped to 60.7 percent. The desire of enhancing the degree was boosted from 26.3 percent to 34 percent. Starting a business which was rised slightly.

批改：描述了图表内容，注意语法问题和拼写问题

原文：phenemenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：us

批改：后面缺少介词of

原文：the

批改：多余，应删除

原文： a greater

批改：搭配不当，应改为 higher

原文：they

批改：前面要加and连接两个句子

原文：starting

批改：与前文achieve形式一致，应改为 start

原文：This phenemenon serves to remind us the fact that more and more students believe that the job participation isn"t the only decision after the graduation,they can also choose to achieve a greater education or starting a business. Here are my private perspectives.

批改：总括个人观点，但应试作文一般是三段式，可以调整到第一段

原文：economy

批改：应该用形容词 economic

原文：under

批改：前面要加动词 be

原文：resource

批改：要用复数 resources

原文：broadcast

批改：建议改为 influence（影响）更准确

原文：this

批改：前面要加连词and连接两个句子

原文：the science and technology are developing in our society which means that the requirement of the career desires for a well-educated freshman.

批改：结构混乱，应改为 the development of science and technology in our society means that careers have higher requirements for well-educated graduates

原文：freshman

批改：freshman是大一新生，这里应该用毕业生graduates

原文：First and foremost, the Reform and Opening up policy plays a significant role in routine decisions,because of economy development,our residents won"t under the pressure of earning the living and they can spend more resource on education. Furthermore, the science and technology are developing in our society which means that the requirement of the career desires for a well-educated freshman. This will force the students to achieve a higher skill. In the end, under the broadcast of social media, people won"t see the job participation as the highest order which represents a deeper view in lifetime.

批改：从政策、科技、社交媒体角度分析毕业生选择变化的原因，注意用词和句子结构

原文：To put all into a nutshell, our students are demanding a higher education,this will increase the productivity of our society and benefit us a lot in life.

批改：总结全文，注意句子结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：5/15

题目要求：描述了图表内容，引发个人观点，立意及论述内容符合题意；注意分段问题；

语言表达：全文存在较多的语法错误，比如单复数问题，动词形式问题，连词问题，句子结构问题等，导致内容表达上不够流畅清晰；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段表达观点，第三段具体分析，第四段总结全文，架构上应调整为三段，可以再优化下；

修改建议：改正原文错误；优化分段；加强语法练习；提高单词拼写的准确性；

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