2013年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2013年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二真题话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of taking part-time jobs among students at a certain university. In the first school year, the percentage of students taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the third school year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 6.31% from the third school year to the fourth school year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, “On life’s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense job pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for making progress. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, experience is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of taking part-time jobs among students at a certain university. In the first school year, the percentage of students taking part-time jobs was 67.77%, but by the third school year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 6.31% from the third school year to the fourth school year.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：experience

批改：work experience

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes, “On life’s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense job pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for making progress. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, experience is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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