2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二大作文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2015年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart provides a clear picture of the distribution of the cost of the Spring Festival. Specifically, New Year gift accounts for 40%, while traffic and having dinner with friends both occupy 20% and other costs also account for 20%. The contrast among categories highlights diverse tendencies and priorities, offering valuable insight into the current situation.

The rise of New Year gifts mirrors broader economic transformation. Nationally, it highlights the enduring value of traditions while embracing innovation. Socially, it reflects citizens" pursuit of quality life beyond basic survival, combining efficiency with cultural aspiration. Over time, this trend reshapes consumption habits and promotes industrial structures. Thus, New Year gifts are both an indicator of economic vitality and a sign of balanced prosperity in the long run.

Maximizing the benefits of New Year gifts in the Spring Festival requires synergy at multiple levels. Parents can encourage children to give New Year gifts to their friends. Governments should protect local industries to innovate more kinds of gifts. Educational institutions can also integrate this value into lessons and extracurricular activities. When these forces converge, New Year gifts will not only fuel economic growth but also consolidate cultural confidence ensuring that development is both inclusive and sustainable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The pie chart provides a clear picture of the distribution of the cost of the Spring Festival. Specifically, New Year gift accounts for 40%, while traffic and having dinner with friends both occupy 20% and other costs also account for 20%. The contrast among categories highlights diverse tendencies and priorities, offering valuable insight into the current situation.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The rise of New Year gifts mirrors broader economic transformation. Nationally, it highlights the enduring value of traditions while embracing innovation. Socially, it reflects citizens" pursuit of quality life beyond basic survival, combining efficiency with cultural aspiration. Over time, this trend reshapes consumption habits and promotes industrial structures. Thus, New Year gifts are both an indicator of economic vitality and a sign of balanced prosperity in the long run.

批改：能够对图表背后的内容进行分析，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。

原文：Maximizing the benefits of New Year gifts in the Spring Festival requires synergy at multiple levels. Parents can encourage children to give New Year gifts to their friends. Governments should protect local industries to innovate more kinds of gifts. Educational institutions can also integrate this value into lessons and extracurricular activities. When these forces converge, New Year gifts will not only fuel economic growth but also consolidate cultural confidence ensuring that development is both inclusive and sustainable.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结并提出自己的建议。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬，再接再厉。

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