考研英语一2016年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2016年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2016年大作文题目

考研英语一2016年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2016年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a father, smoking and watching TV, while demanding his son to study hard. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, both father and son put their hearts into studying. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that good examples are the brush that paints a bright future, while negative examples are the shackle that hinders progress.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, while certain Chinese traditions may be obsolete, the virtue of setting good examples is one that should never lose its luster, as it is an essential bond that keeps the Chinese nation thriving. On the other hand, negative examples are like a heavy chain that hinders children’s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in the future society.

In brief, positive examples are the catalyst for social and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality; additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of negative examples to ensure that our growth stays on course.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：,

批改：去掉逗号，正在进行时

原文： while

批改：去掉while，非谓语结构做状语

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, there is a father, smoking and watching TV, while demanding his son to study hard. On the contrary, in the right-hand portrayal, both father and son put their hearts into studying. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that good examples are the brush that paints a bright future, while negative examples are the shackle that hinders progress.

批改：对图画信息的总结很准确

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, while certain Chinese traditions may be obsolete, the virtue of setting good examples is one that should never lose its luster, as it is an essential bond that keeps the Chinese nation thriving. On the other hand, negative examples are like a heavy chain that hinders children’s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in the future society.

批改：正反两方面论证，词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：In brief, positive examples are the catalyst for social and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality; additionally, we must be acutely aware of the detrimental effects of negative examples to ensure that our growth stays on course.

批改：excellent，回扣主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，考试使保持这样的结构；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，词组，定语从句，非谓语结构和强调句变化使用，体现了英语水平；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯，老师评卷时会非常喜欢；

4.根据自己的基础，要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，写作和背诵相结合，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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