考研英语一2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

What a thought-provoking scene the drawing presents! Titled "The Remains of the Journey", it shows a small boat floating on a river. On the boat, two tourists are enjoying their trip, but meanwhile, they are casually throwing garbage into the river. The river is already filled with various kinds of trash, such as lunch boxes, plastic bags and bottles, which are floating on the water surface.

The intended meaning of the drawing is quite clear: it reflects the lack of environmental awareness among some people during their travels, highlighting the serious problem of environmental pollution caused by human activities. In our daily life, we can often see similar phenomena. Some people only care about their own comfort and enjoyment during the journey, ignoring the impact of their behavior on the environment. They don"t realize that the beautiful natural scenery they are enjoying now is very fragile and needs to be cherished and protected.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to address this issue. First of all, we should strengthen environmental education to enhance people"s awareness of environmental protection. Let everyone understand that protecting the environment is everyone"s responsibility, and even small actions like not littering can make a big difference. Secondly, relevant departments should strengthen the management of scenic spots, set up more trash cans and increase patrols to prevent people from littering. Finally, laws and regulations should be improved to impose penalties on those who damage the environment, so as to restrain people"s bad behavior. Only in this way can we ensure that our journey will leave beautiful memories instead of "remains" that pollute the environment, and we can enjoy the beauty of nature for a long time.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：What a thought-provoking scene the drawing presents! Titled "The Remains of the Journey", it shows a small boat floating on a river. On the boat, two tourists are enjoying their trip, but meanwhile, they are casually throwing garbage into the river. The river is already filled with various kinds of trash, such as lunch boxes, plastic bags and bottles, which are floating on the water surface.

批改：good，原创度很高，描写生动形象

原文：The intended meaning of the drawing is quite clear: it reflects the lack of environmental awareness among some people during their travels, highlighting the serious problem of environmental pollution caused by human activities. In our daily life, we can often see similar phenomena. Some people only care about their own comfort and enjoyment during the journey, ignoring the impact of their behavior on the environment. They don"t realize that the beautiful natural scenery they are enjoying now is very fragile and needs to be cherished and protected.

批改：论证逻辑连贯，词汇句型丰富

原文：In my opinion, measures must be taken to address this issue. First of all, we should strengthen environmental education to enhance people"s awareness of environmental protection. Let everyone understand that protecting the environment is everyone"s responsibility, and even small actions like not littering can make a big difference. Secondly, relevant departments should strengthen the management of scenic spots, set up more trash cans and increase patrols to prevent people from littering. Finally, laws and regulations should be improved to impose penalties on those who damage the environment, so as to restrain people"s bad behavior. Only in this way can we ensure that our journey will leave beautiful memories instead of "remains" that pollute the environment, and we can enjoy the beauty of nature for a long time.

批改：very good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19/20

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，考试使保持这样的结构；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句交替变化使用，体现了英语水平；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯，老师评卷时会非常喜欢；

4.原创度很高，又借鉴了老师的精髓，基础非常棒，不过可以适当写短点，考试时没有充足时间这样写，非常棒，保持！

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