2025年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2025年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二写作冲刺教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different means what elders choose to recreat at a cecrtain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%,followed by taking a walk at 68.3%,. Additionally, factors such as growing flowers, reading, playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, elders are no longer contene with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why lots og elders choose watching TV. In addition, as the old saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is usually present." Nowadays, elders are no longer compelled compelled to immense pressure, and as a result, watching TV has emerged as their effortless choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsurperising.

What about the future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of elders, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable on the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：cecrtain

批改：certain

原文：recreat

批改：recreate

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different means what elders choose to recreat at a cecrtain community. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%,followed by taking a walk at 68.3%,. Additionally, factors such as growing flowers, reading, playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4%, respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：contene

批改：content

原文：og

批改：of

原文：no longer compelled

批改：重复去掉

批改：加face

原文：unsurperising

批改：unsurprising

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, elders are no longer contene with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why lots og elders choose watching TV. In addition, as the old saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is usually present." Nowadays, elders are no longer compelled compelled to immense pressure, and as a result, watching TV has emerged as their effortless choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsurperising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about the future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of elders, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable on the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

原文：on

批改：in

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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