2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the change of population in chinese city and rural during 20 years. In 1990 the number of city population was 300 but by 2010. this figure had gradually risen to 666. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160. durling the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summorized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phonomenon is the significant progress made by china"s city economic level in responding to these changes. In addition, In the wake of the the high-speed advancement of society. People are nolonger content with mere material satisfation, they also purse spiritual enjoyment. This led to more people Prefer to live in city rather than rural due to the more interesting activities the city have.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrust, the number of rural Population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in chinese city and rural d

批改：chinese → Chinese (专有名词首字母未大写) city and rural → urban and rural areas

原文：s 300 but by 2010. this figure had gradually risen to 666. In contrast, the number of rural populati

批改：300 → 300 million (数据单位缺失) 666 → 666 million (数据单位缺失) 2010. this figure → 2010, this figure (标点错误) durling → during (拼写错误)

原文： line chart clearly depicts the change of population in chinese city and rural during 20 years. In 1990 the number of city population was 300 but by 2010. this figure had gradually risen to 666. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160. durling the same period.

批改：本段虽然把握了核心趋势，但出现了严重的数据单位缺失和术语使用不当

原文：ummorized as follo

批改：summorized → summarized (拼写错误) chinese → Chinese (首字母未大写)

原文：honomenon

批改：phonomenon → phenomenon (拼写错误)

原文： the the high-speed advancement of society. People are nolonger cont

批改：the the → the (重复用词) nolonger → no longer (拼写错误) satisfation → satisfaction (拼写错误)

原文：purse spiritual enjoyment. This led to more people Prefer to live in city rather than rural due to the more interesting activities the city ha

批改：pursue → pursue (拼写错误) Prefer → prefer (不必要的首字母大写) the city have → cities have (语法错误)

原文：ore reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summorized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phonomenon is the significant progress made by china"s city economic level in responding to these changes. In addition, In the wake of the the high-speed advancement of society. People are nolonger content with mere material satisfation, they also purse spiritual enjoyment. This led to more people Prefer to live in city rather than rural due to the more interesting activities the city have.

批改：语言表达错误频发

原文：n contrust, the number of rural Population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：In contrust → In contrast (拼写错误) rural Population → rural population (不必要的首字母大写)

原文：at about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrust, the number of rural Population will likely continue to decrease

批改：结尾段预测方向正确

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9分

总评：

同学，你好！这篇作文反映出几个需要重点关注的基础问题：

主要问题：

数据表述不完整：遗漏数据单位会严重影响理解

语言基础薄弱：拼写错误频繁，语法问题较多

论述内容空洞：使用大量没有实质信息的套话

改进建议：

确保数据准确性

写作前仔细确认图表中的所有数据信息

明确标注数据单位

夯实语言基础

重点练习高频词汇的正确拼写

加强基本语法训练

提升论述质量

用具体的经济、社会因素替代空洞套话

从就业、教育、医疗等实际角度分析

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