考研英语一2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, sitting on the boat and throwing waste, which makes river dirty. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that pollution is an issue that requires great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. on the one hand, protecting environment holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for safeguarding public health, further propelling social stability and sustainable development. On the other hand, tragically, although the lack of clear behavioral standards might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of convenience.,have disregarded the virtue of protecting environment.

How can we put an end to the problem of pollution? It is suggested by many that we need a package deal, including issuing related laws and enhancing supervision. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to strengthen self-discipline. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：pollution

批改：改为 environmental pollution 更合适

原文： waste

批改： waste 泛指“废弃物”，在这个语境下，使用 rubbish into the river 更合适

原文： river

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 the river

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

原文：on

批改：首字母大写

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达不错，也很具体

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

批改：语法正确

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处细节表达问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心 2.首字母大小写要规范。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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