考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the marketing percentage of some car brands in China. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was 25, but by 2009, this figure had substantially risen to 30. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands declined by 10 during from 2008 to 2009.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s, are accustomed to using domestic brands and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is currently undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China’s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：25

批改：缺少百分号 应为 “25%”

原文：30

批改：30%

原文：10

批改：10%

原文：during

批改：应删除

批改：内容上呈现题干图表变化趋势，契合要求；要注意数据格式规范化、介词冗余的问题。

批改：内容上围绕品牌份额变化分析原因，方向贴合要求；语言逻辑分层清晰，表述流畅。

批改：内容上对品牌份额趋势给出预判，回应图表核心变化，符合写作要求；语言逻辑简洁明了。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

评语：结构完整清晰；内容上精准捕捉题干数据核心趋势，数据呈现基本准确，原因分析和趋势预测方向贴合主题，符合题意要求。语言表达流畅，逻辑衔接清晰，无严重语法错误，仅存在细节格式和用词问题。继续加油！

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