考研英语一2010年大作文实例分析与批改

2010年考研英语一大作文围绕哪一类话题命题？本文精选的范文聚焦考研英语一作文真题话题方向，结合启航教育多年考研英语一教学沉淀，从描述图表、解读寓意到发表评论三大角度，完整呈现高分作文的内在结构。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

An extraordinary scene unfolds before us: a huge hot pot is filled with amounts of food in the shape of stones, each with a word on it, such us Lao She and Einstein. At the bottom of the picture, the caption"culture hot pot is delicious and nutritious" resonates deeply, which demonstrates the significance of the integration of Chinese and Western cultures.

Nowadays, globalization has made the integration of Chinese and Western cultures an inevitable trend, which helps us understand each other better and makes our world richer. To begin with, both Chinese and Western cultures have great value. Therefore, while inheriting Chinese excellent traditional culture, learning the excellent culture of the west can not only make Chinese culture achieve new development, but also enhance cooperation and communication between China and the west. In addition, combining cultures drives progress. For instance, the combination of traditional Chinese medicine and Western medicine can make medicine technology more advanced.

Overall, the integration of Chinese and Western cultures brings us a wide range of benefits. We are supposed to make more efforts in cultural integration, like creating fusion cusine combining chinese and Western ingredients.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：An extraordinary scene unfolds before us: a huge hot pot is filled with amounts of food in the shape of stones, each with a word on it, such us Lao She and Einstein. At the bottom of the picture, the caption"culture hot pot is delicious and nutritious" resonates deeply, which demonstrates the significance of the integration of Chinese and Western cultures.

批改：对图画内容描述的很全面，且能够清晰点明主题。

原文：Nowadays, globalization has made the integration of Chinese and Western cultures an inevitable trend, which helps us understand each other better and makes our world richer. To begin with, both Chinese and Western cultures have great value. Therefore, while inheriting Chinese excellent traditional culture, learning the excellent culture of the west can not only make Chinese culture achieve new development, but also enhance cooperation and communication between China and the west. In addition, combining cultures drives progress. For instance, the combination of traditional Chinese medicine and Western medicine can make medicine technology more advanced.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。

原文：chinese

批改：Chinese首字母大写

原文：Overall, the integration of Chinese and Western cultures brings us a wide range of benefits. We are supposed to make more efforts in cultural integration, like creating fusion cusine combining chinese and Western ingredients.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，国家名作为专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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