2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2015年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二作文模板话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of expenditure of people in China in Spring Festival. The gifts of New Year takes the lead at 40%. Additionally. factors such as transformation,go out for dinner with family and friends and other are also considered, all accounting for 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of populace, allow them to buy some exquisite gifts to the family and friends in Spring Festival. Additionally, In the wake of high-speed advancement of society , people’s attitude towards consumption has ungergone significant changes. People are no longer content with material satisfaction; they also pursue spirit enjoyment . This explain why an increasing number of people start paying more attention to family and friends.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people’s expenditure in Spring Festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era,and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：takes

批改：gifts是复数，改成take

批改：逗号

原文：go

批改：going

原文：other

批改：other是形容词，others是名词

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of expenditure of people in China in Spring Festival. The gifts of New Year takes the lead at 40%. Additionally. factors such as transformation,go out for dinner with family and friends and other are also considered, all accounting for 20%.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：allow

批改：改成allowing分词做状语

原文：In

批改：逗号后的单词小写

原文：explain

批改：注意主谓一致，改成explains

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of populace, allow them to buy some exquisite gifts to the family and friends in Spring Festival. Additionally, In the wake of high-speed advancement of society , people’s attitude towards consumption has ungergone significant changes. People are no longer content with material satisfaction; they also pursue spirit enjoyment . This explain why an increasing number of people start paying more attention to family and friends.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people’s expenditure in Spring Festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era,and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意区分词性；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意主谓一致问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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