2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population in China"s city and countryside from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city"s population was 300 million.But by 2010, the number had a substantially risen to 666 million.In contrast, the number of countryside population experienced a significent decline of 160 million.

The core reason of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has a tremendous efforts to driven economic growth and elevate city"s investment, enabling people have more great development in city. In addition, with the rapid development of society, an increasing number of people work in city, particularly those who was married, they have a significent demand to have a house in city. Considering this factors, the phenomenon depicted in the chart is unsarprising.

what about future trend? I am confident that the number of city"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. Meanwhile, the number of contryside population will continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population in China"s city and countryside from 1990 to 2010.

批改：句子清晰点明图表类型和主题，即柱状图展示中国城乡人口变化，表述准确。

原文： In 1990, the number of city"s population was 300 million.

批改：给出了1990年城市人口数量这一具体数据

原文：But by 2010, the number had a substantially risen to 666 million.

批改：“had a substantially risen”表述错误，应改为“had substantially risen”，此句想表达到2010年城市人口大幅增长。

原文：n contrast, the number of countryside population experienced a significent decline of 160 million.

批改：significent”拼写错误，应为“significant”，该句指出农村人口数量下降。

原文：The core reason of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

批改：此句引出对现象原因的分析，起到过渡作用，表述合理。

原文：To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has a tremendous efforts to driven economic growth and elevate city"s investment, enabling people have more great development in city.

批改：此句想表达政府在推动经济增长和提升城市投资方面的作用，但存在多处错误。“has a tremendous efforts”中“efforts”应用单数“effort”；“to driven”应改为“to drive”；“enable people have”应改为“enable people to have”；“more great”表述不当，可改为“greater”；“in city”应改为“in cities”。

原文：In addition, with the rapid development of society, an increasing number of people work in city, particularly those who was married, they have a significent demand to have a house in city.

批改：主谓不一致：“those who was married” 中，先行词 “those”（指代 “people”）是复数，定语从句的谓语动词应改为复数形式 “were”。 冠词缺失：“work in city” 中，“city” 是可数名词，此处表示泛指 “城市”，需在前面加定冠词 “the”，即 “work in the city”。“significent” 存在拼写错误，正确拼写应为 “significant”。“particularly those who was married, they have a...” 中，“those who...married” 和 “they have...” 是两个独立的完整句子，仅用逗号连接属于 “逗号粘连”，不符合英文语法规则。可删除 “they”，让 “particularly those who...married” 作 “people” 的同位语，使句子结构更紧凑。 修改后的完整句子参考： In addition, with the rapid development of society, an increasing number of people work in the city, particularly those who were married, and they have a significant demand to own a house in the city.

原文：Considering this factors, the phenomenon depicted in the chart is unsarprising.

批改：“this factors”应改为“these factors”；“unsarprising”拼写错误，应为“unsurprising”，此句表示考虑到这些因素，图表中的现象并不奇怪。

原文：what about future trend?

批改：首字母未大写

原文：I am confident that the number of city"s population will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：该句表达对未来城市人口增长的信心。

原文：Meanwhile, the number of contryside population will continue to decrease.

批改：“contryside”拼写错误，应为“countryside”

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population in China"s city and countryside from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city"s population was 300 million.But by 2010, the number had a substantially risen to 666 million.In contrast, the number of countryside population experienced a significent decline of 160 million

批改：成功介绍了图表的主题和展示的时间范围，并给出了1990年和2010年城乡人口数量的具体变化

原文：The core reason of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has a tremendous efforts to driven economic growth and elevate city"s investment, enabling people have more great development in city. In addition, with the rapid development of society, an increasing number of people work in city, particularly those who was married, they have a significent demand to have a house in city. Considering this factors, the phenomenon depicted in the chart is unsarprising

批改：试图分析城乡人口变化的原因，但存在较多语法和词汇错误，影响了内容的准确传达。

原文：what about future trend? I am confident that the number of city"s population will steadily increase in the following decades. Meanwhile, the number of contryside population will continue to decrease

批改：引出了对未来趋势的讨论并给出预测

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