2023年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2023年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

Elaborately and Luminously, this line chart arranges the proportion of health literacy level of residents in China from 2012 to 2021. As we can see from the graph, the health literacy level increased slightly from 2012 to 2016. However, it rocketed up dramatically from 2016 to 2021.

I intend to make some further analysis as follows. The factors contributing to the continuous rise in health literacy lovel are vastly complex. With the rapid development of economy and improvement of living standards, some attribute it to that more and more people value their health. Others attach importance to the government which calls on citizens to exercise or do sports. Besides, the improvement of medical standards has also made a huge contribution.

Considering these general illustrations, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that the health literacy level will rise up continually. The tendency that health literacy will continually play critical roles may be irreversible.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Elaborately and Luminously, this line chart arranges the proportion of health literacy level of residents in China from 2012 to 2021. As we can see from the graph, the health literacy level increased slightly from 2012 to 2016. However, it rocketed up dramatically from 2016 to 2021.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：lovel

批改：level

批改：后加名词才能构成同位语从句，改成：the fact that

原文：I intend to make some further analysis as follows. The factors contributing to the continuous rise in health literacy lovel are vastly complex. With the rapid development of economy and improvement of living standards, some attribute it to that more and more people value their health. Others attach importance to the government which calls on citizens to exercise or do sports. Besides, the improvement of medical standards has also made a huge contribution.

批改：能够对图表内容进行论述分析，语言较为连贯。

原文：Considering these general illustrations, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that the health literacy level will rise up continually. The tendency that health literacy will continually play critical roles may be irreversible.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意同位语从句的正确使用

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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