2019年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2019年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文模板教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduates in certain university from 2013 to 2018. In 2013, the percentage of graduates who choose to work was 68.1%，but by 2018, this figure had gradually decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of graduates who chose to make a higher education experienced a steady rise of 7.7%. Simultaneously, the percentage of graduates chose making a new company steadily rose from

1.3% to 2.6%.

The main reasons can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample oppotunities for higher education. What is more, in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, an increasing number of people have realized a high education background is a key element that distinguishes exceptional individual from ordinary people. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I am contident that the percentage of people who choose finding a job will steadily decrease. In contrast, the numer of people who choose a higher education and maing a company will increase in the following years.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in certain

批改：in a certain

原文：choose

批改：过去时chose

原文：making a new company

批改：to start a business

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduates in certain university from 2013 to 2018. In 2013, the percentage of graduates who choose to work was 68.1%，but by 2018, this figure had gradually decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of graduates who chose to make a higher education experienced a steady rise of 7.7%. Simultaneously, the percentage of graduates chose making a new company steadily rose from 1.3% to 2.6%.

批改：较准确描述了图表内容

原文： people

批改：students更合适

原文：The main reasons can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample oppotunities for higher education. What is more, in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, an increasing number of people have realized a high education background is a key element that distinguishes exceptional individual from ordinary people. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

批改：论点清晰，词汇和句法丰富

原文：finding

批改：to find

原文：maing a company

批改：start a business

原文：What about future trends? I am contident that the percentage of people who choose finding a job will steadily decrease. In contrast, the numer of people who choose a higher education and maing a company will increase in the following years.

批改：预测趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

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