考研英语一2010年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2010年考研英语一大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon,there is a boiling hot pot, filled with many cultural elements,including Lao she,kung fu, shakespeare and so on.Evidently,the cartoon intends to convey to readers that it is cultural fusion that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand,cultural fusion holds exceptional significance for a notion,as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength,further propelling social stability and sustainable development.On the other hand,neglecting cultural fusion is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress,not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth,but also significantly affecting its international image.

In brief,cultural fusion is the catalyst for societal and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively advocate and support this practice.Only doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：shakespeare

批改：这里应该首字母大写

原文：As shown in the cartoon,there is a boiling hot pot, filled with many cultural elements,including Lao she,kung fu, shakespeare and so on.Evidently,the cartoon intends to convey to readers that it is cultural fusion that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：notion

批改：nation

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways,but two of them are particularly significant.On the one hand,cultural fusion holds exceptional significance for a notion,as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength,further propelling social stability and sustainable development.On the other hand,neglecting cultural fusion is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation"s progress,not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth,but also significantly affecting its international image.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一文化融合的重要性和必要性，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：doing

批改：by doing

原文：In brief,cultural fusion is the catalyst for societal and personal development,from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively advocate and support this practice.Only doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance

批改：联系自身，总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：第一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。第二段以分论点的形式阐释图画寓意，文化的融合和交流问题，逻辑严谨，层次分明。最后一段表明作者本人对文化融合和交流这种现象的态度或看法，此评论部分可以提出建议，考虑背景及原因，或描述未来。

整体来看，没有细节错误，但要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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