2025年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文范文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2025年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the olders normal activites in their free time. Watching TV takes the lead at 90.8%, followed by go for a walk at 68:3%. Additionally, factors such as reading, raising flowers and playing chess are also considered, accounting for 34.7%, 31.8% and 18.4% respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford TV that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of our lives, significantly altering people behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of old people have started paying more attention to healthy. Considering these factors, the depicted plenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that go for a walk, will steadily increase in the future. In contrust, the proportion of watching TV will decrease.

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三、考研英语作文批改

批改：精准抓取图表五类核心活动及对应占比，主题聚焦 “老年人休闲活动偏好”，数据呈现完整，完美完成 “描述图表” 的基础任务，无跑题

原文： olders

批改：elderly residents 更正式

原文：normal activites in their free time.

批改：primary leisure activities 更精准

原文： go

批改：going for a walk 动名词形式

原文：raising flowers

批改：growing flowers 更地道

批改：中间段落分层论述论点，条理清晰，层次明确。内容论述角度符合主旨，紧扣主题，具有一定说服力。整体语言表达较为流畅。

原文：people

批改：people’s behaviors 所有格

原文：healthy

批改：health 名词形式

原文：plenomenon

批改：phenomenon

批改：预测未来趋势，态度明确，符合英二 “结尾有总结” 的基本要求，立意正向

原文：go for a walk

批改：the proportion of going for a walk 主语规范

原文：contrust

批改：contrast

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11.5

评语：结构规范完整，主题精准聚焦 “老年人休闲活动偏好”，准确抓取图表核心数据，主题一致性强，全程围绕 “老年人需求” 展开，无跑题或逻辑跳跃，立意贴合老龄化社会热点，契合英二的核心要求。语言表达注意单词拼写、名词单复数、动名词用法。继续加油

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