考研英语一2010年大作文写作方向与示例

作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2010年考研英语一大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语一写作技巧常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, filled with many cultural elements, including Lao She, Shake speare, kung fu, Einstein and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural fusion that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural fusion can ignite our creativity, and promote. personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, neglecting cultural fusion is like a heavy chain that hinder our nation"s progress, not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image.

In brief, cultural fusion is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual potential, create a happier life, and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Shake speare,

批改：Shakespeare，需要合起来写

原文：Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural fusion that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：抓住了关键信息点，文化融合

原文：ways. but

批改：这里应该是逗号，

原文： hinder

批改：前面的that指代单数主语a heavy chain，应该是hinders

原文：In brief, cultural fusion is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual potential, create a happier life, and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：总结没有问题～

原文：The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural fusion can ignite our creativity, and promote. personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, neglecting cultural fusion is like a heavy chain that hinder our nation"s progress, not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image

批改：对核心寓意的把握精准到位

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

题目要求：整体还不错，第一段简要描述了漫画并揭示了其寓意；第二段阐述了文化的重要性；第三段总结并发出呼吁。结构完整，符合题目要求。

语言表达：同学的语言表达流畅，使用了丰富的词汇和较复杂的句子结构，显示出一定的英语水平。使用的词汇都优秀，文章中的大部分语言表达是准确的，能够清晰地传达意思。但是存在一些拼写问题需要注意。

行文逻辑：文章按照描述图像、分析重要性、总结呼吁的顺序展开，结构清晰。过渡较为自然。内容上也都非常合适，和题目的信息点相关性很高。

建议：同学这篇文章完成度很好，不难看出私下有积累一些好词好句，也建议同学尽快将这些好词好句内化为自己的。一定要自己写文章练习作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。另外关于文章内出现的错误需要留心，每次写完之后养成通篇读一遍的习惯，在读的过程中就专注抓语法错误、拼写错误。这些不必要犯的错误一定要扼杀掉！

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