2024年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2024年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语作文批改热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The chart shows the crop of students by taking practical labor course in the certain school.Learning relative knowledge is the largest,occupying 91.3%.Enhancing the ability of cooperation is smallest,occupying 32.6%.Improving the ability of practice and having a good feeling occupying 84.8% and 54.5% respectively.

The data indicates the practical labor course is very valuable.It can help students learn knowledge and improve the ability of practice.Practicing could improve our creative ability and accumulate our practical experience.If you finish your task,you will feel happy.Because you can feel that you gain many crops.I can infer that this course focus on independent task.I think this course can hold more cooperative task.It will improve students" communicate skills and enhance their emotions.

All in all,I think practical labor course is helpful to students.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：crop

批改：crop指庄稼的收成，改成main gains

原文：in the certain school.

批改：in a certain university

原文：occupying

批改：改成谓语occupy

原文：The chart shows the crop of students by taking practical labor course in the certain school.Learning relative knowledge is the largest,occupying 91.3%.Enhancing the ability of cooperation is smallest,occupying 32.6%.Improving the ability of practice and having a good feeling occupying 84.8% and 54.5% respectively.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：crops

批改：gains

原文：focus

批改：单三focuses

原文：task

批改：复数

原文：communicate

批改：改成名词

原文：The data indicates the practical labor course is very valuable.It can help students learn knowledge and improve the ability of practice.Practicing could improve our creative ability and accumulate our practical experience.If you finish your task,you will feel happy.Because you can feel that you gain many crops.I can infer that this course focus on independent task.I think this course can hold more cooperative task.It will improve students" communicate skills and enhance their emotions.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言问题。

原文：All in all,I think practical labor course is helpful to students.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结，起到了点题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，要注意恰当选词，名词单复数要使用正确以及注意区分词性；句式方面和语法方面，注意谓语的正确使用。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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