2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2014年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二作文模板备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban populations and rural populations in China over the past 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban populations was 300, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666. In constrast, the number of rural populations experienced a deline of 16oduing the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be Summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to bulid a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for futher education. and drive economic growth. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economy in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：over the past 20 years

批改：不是过去20年，而是20年间，可以表示为from 1990 to 2010

原文：300

批改：加million

原文：666

批改：加million

原文：constrast

批改：contrast

原文：deline

批改：decline

原文：16o

批改：加million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban populations and rural populations in China over the past 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban populations was 300, but by 2010, the figure had substantially risen to 666. In constrast, the number of rural populations experienced a deline of 16oduing the same period.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：duing

批改：during

原文：As

批改：逗号后单词小写

原文：our government has made tremendous efforts to bulid a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for futher education.

批改：这句论述和人口变化没有关系

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be Summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to bulid a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for futher education. and drive economic growth. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s economy in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：要注意论述的内容一定要和图表信息紧密相关

批改：加of

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，句子要完整不要缺少成分；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题，好要注意论述内容与作文主题的相关性。再接再厉。

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