2013年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bor chart clearly depicts the college students about their part-time job situations. In first-year the percentage of students to part-time job was 67.77%, but by second-year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.13%. Meanwhile, the proportion of students to part-time job experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from third-year and fourth-year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follow. To start with, as the conductor enhestrating the symphony of changes, our government workig made tremendous efforts to ensure platfrom, enabling college students have better job opportunities. In additional, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society fullom of changes, challenges. and chances, expericence is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students to part-time job will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：bor

批改：bar

原文：ar

批改：后加逗号

原文： to

批改：to take

原文： to

批改：to take

原文：f students to part-time job was 67.77%, but by second-year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.13%. Meanwhile, the proportion of students to part-time job experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from third-year and fourth-y

批改：数据还是比较清楚和明确的，句子结构合理，但是一些小错误要注意避免哦。

原文：hestrat

批改：orchestrating

原文：orkig

批改：has

原文：ure platfro

批改：表述不对哦，改为give more opportunities to the people

原文：av

批改：to have

原文：tion

批改：addition

原文：fullom

批改：full

原文：or enhestrating the symphony of changes, our government workig made tremendous efforts to ensure platfrom, enabling college students have better job opportunities. In additional, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society fullom of changes, challenges. and chances, expericence is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long ru

批改：内容比较符合题意，句子结构完整，注意依稀 小错误哦

原文：to

批改：to take

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15

语法：语法上注意固定搭配不能写错，注意to do，一般后面要加动词，或者是名词，。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，第二段很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是写错了单词哦，注意一些词汇使用的适当性哦。

内容：内容比较符合英文作文写作要求，结构合理。

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