2015年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

本文整理了2015年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly dlisplays the percentage breakdown of residents" consumption in certain city during Spring Festival. on New Year"s gifits take the lead at 40% Additionally, fuctors such as eating parties, traffic and others are also considered, accounding for 20％ respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summaried as follows. To start with, thanks to the growing ecomomy in China, the annual income of Chinese has been increasing year by year, leading to the significant improvement of resident"s living standards, So people have more money to brought gifits. In addition, as the saying goes: on life"s stage, pressure is always present.Nowdays, residents are compelled to confront life"s pressure, as a resurt, eating parties have emerged as their significant choice Spring Festival of holiday.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of resident. We can draw a conclusion that the wave will continue in the near future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dlisplays

批改：displays

原文：fuctors

批改：factors

原文： accounding

批改：accounting

原文：certain

批改：前面缺少冠词a

原文：on

批改：多余，应删除

原文：40%

批改：后面要加句号

原文：summaried

批改：summarized

原文：ecomomy

批改：economy

原文：Chinese

批改：后面要加residents，表示 中国居民

原文：resident"s

批改：应该用复数所有格residents"

原文：So

批改：小写

原文：brought

批改：应该用原型buy

原文：: on

批改：要用逗号+双引号+大写

批改：后面要加双引号

原文：Nowdays

批改：Nowadays

原文：resurt

批改：result

原文：Spring

批改：前面要加介词during

原文：of

批改：多余应删除

原文：resident

批改：要用复数residents

原文：The pie chart clearly dlisplays the percentage breakdown of residents" consumption in certain city during Spring Festival. on New Year"s gifits take the lead at 40% Additionally, fuctors such as eating parties, traffic and others are also considered, accounding for 20％ respectively.

批改：描述了饼图数据，表达符合题意

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summaried as follows. To start with, thanks to the growing ecomomy in China, the annual income of Chinese has been increasing year by year, leading to the significant improvement of resident"s living standards, So people have more money to brought gifits. In addition, as the saying goes: on life"s stage, pressure is always present.Nowdays, residents are compelled to confront life"s pressure, as a resurt, eating parties have emerged as their significant choice Spring Festival of holiday.

批改：从经济和压力角度分析消费现象原因，注意拼写和语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of resident. We can draw a conclusion that the wave will continue in the near future.

批改：表达个人观点，注意名词单复数

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7

题目要求：对图表内容描绘全面准确，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了一些经典句式，但语法错误和拼写错误也较多，导致内容表达上不够流畅清晰；练习阶段也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，语法水平提升后再套用模板效果更好；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段进行详细论述，第三段表达个人观点，整体架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误，继续多多积累经典句式；提升语法水平；提高单词拼写的准确性；

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