2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2014年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China during 20 years. ln 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had significantly risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural propulation experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound infrastructure system, enabling more residents to have ample opportunities to settle down in cities. In addition, an increasing number of people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, living in cities can have more opportunities than rural areas, which is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：This bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China during 20 years. ln 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had significantly risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural propulation experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound infrastructure system, enabling more residents to have ample opportunities to settle down in cities. In addition, an increasing number of people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, living in cities can have more opportunities than rural areas, which is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，没有细节错误，但要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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