2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009.In 2008,the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%,but by 2009,this rate had substantially risen to around 33%.In contrast, proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10%during the same period .Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows .To start with ,Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation .In my view , the automotive industry in responding to these changes .In addition,Against the backdrop of our country’s rapid and dynamic development , the younger generation ,particularly those both in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to useing domestic cars and have become the primary group.Considering these factors,the decipted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising .

What about future trends.I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease .

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：proportion

批改：此处是特指，改为 the proportion

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：Against

批改：此处首字母不大写

原文： useing

批改：using

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文： in

批改：这个句子没有谓语动词，此处改为 is , 表示 汽车行业正在应对这些变化。

批改：此处为问号

原文：brand

批改：可数名词单数形式不能单独存在，改为 brands

批改：结尾段内容表达很好。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，试着多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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