考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The line clearly depicts the brand of car in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008 the percentage of Japanese brand was approximately 35%, but by 2009, this percentage had gradually decreased to 25%. In contrast, the percentage of Chinese brand experienced a significant obvious increase of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American remained stable.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger consumers, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to buying domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand-car will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brand-car will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： line

批改：line用在这里不切题，改为 柱状图 bar chart

原文： brand of car

批改：图表的标题翻译不地道，改为 market share of different car brands

原文：brand

批改：可数名词变复数， 改为 brands

原文：brand

批改：同上

原文：American

批改：后面缺少brands

原文：A

批改：小写

原文：car

批改：改为 cars

原文：Chinese brand-car

批改：brand-car不是标准表达。通常用Chinese-brand cars

原文：foreign brand-car

批改：同上

原文： relatively stable

批改：relatively stable（相对稳定）不能修饰 decrease ，删除即可

原文：10%

批改：因为不到10%，所以前加 about

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger consumers, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to buying domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：与范文相似度较高，建议用自己的语言

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11 /15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析很好，内容详实，丰富具体；

从语言层面看，语法上可数名词前一定要有冠词，合成词使用不当，副词使用不当。

建议：审题先搞清楚是什么图，比如 bar chart 、pie chart，多积累短语的固定用法。

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