考研英语一2010年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2010年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, which is filled with diverse culture, such as Lao She,kung fu and The Swan Lake. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is the mixation of diverse culture that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, accepting diverse culture can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, accepting diverse culture holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, accepting diverse culture is the catalyst for societal and personal developme, from which we all stand and benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：mixation

批改：用fusion融合更好一些

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot, which is filled with diverse culture, such as Lao She,kung fu and The Swan Lake. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is the mixation of diverse culture that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够完整全面的描述出图画中的现象，并能够直接点明作文的主题。

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, accepting diverse culture can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, accepting diverse culture holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：developme

批改：development

原文：and

批改：to

原文：In brief, accepting diverse culture is the catalyst for societal and personal developme, from which we all stand and benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，准确全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误，以及正确选取主题词；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础较好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误会更好。继续加油。

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