考研英语一2010年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2010年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon,there is a hotpot embodying diverse cultures from across the globe such as kungfu, humanity, Shakespeare and so on. A sentence "Cultural hotpot is delicious as well as nutritious" is inscribed under the hotpot. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that it is cultural integration and communication that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural fusion can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment thus making life rewarding, colorful and meaningful.On the other hand, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morality, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, cultural blending is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture and encourage the embrace of diverse cultural influences. Only by doing so can we make our country shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：thus

批改：前面加个逗号

原文：As shown in the cartoon,there is a hotpot embodying diverse cultures from across the globe such as kungfu, humanity, Shakespeare and so on. A sentence "Cultural hotpot is delicious as well as nutritious" is inscribed under the hotpot. Evidently, the cartoon intends to convey to readers that it is cultural integration and communication that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural fusion can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment thus making life rewarding, colorful and meaningful.On the other hand, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morality, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：词汇和句型丰富，建议分成两端来写

原文：In brief, cultural blending is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture and encourage the embrace of diverse cultural influences. Only by doing so can we make our country shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：very good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，建议三段式，方便阅读和批改；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，强调句、非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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