考研英语二2011年大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文范文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market share of some brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was 25%, but by 2009, this figure had substantially risen to 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Janpanese cars experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Bimultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the significant progress was made by China"s automotive industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, strongly support domestic automobiles and have become the primary consumer group.

what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic cars is a clear sign of social development and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

原文：Bimultaneously

批改：Simultaneously

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

原文：share

批改：此处指代多个不同的份额数值，改为 shares

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，内容表达也很好

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在一处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2.拼写要细心 3. 首字母大小写要规范，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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