2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of residents expense in spring fastival vacation in certain city. New year gifts take the lead at 40%, followed by transportation at 20%. Additionally, factors such as eating food and others are also considered, accounting for 20%and 20%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of the changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive rapid growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing people to afford new year gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of individuals choose traveling in spring festival vacation rather than staying at home.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of individuals, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：residents

批改：这里要用复数所有格residents’

原文：expense

批改：expense可数，后面要加s

原文：spring fastival

批改：Spring Festival

原文： certain

批改：前面要加冠词a

原文：year

批改：大写

原文：, followed by transportation at 20%

批改：后面三个因素的占比都是20%，建议放在 一起写

原文：eating food

批改：表达不是很准确，聚餐可以用dinner parties

原文：and

批改：交通因素可以补充在前面

原文：20%and 20%,

批改：直接写20%即可

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of residents expense in spring fastival vacation in certain city. New year gifts take the lead at 40%, followed by transportation at 20%. Additionally, factors such as eating food and others are also considered, accounting for 20%and 20%, respectively.

批改：描述了图标内容，注意语法问题

原文：the

批改：changes泛指各类变革，不需要定冠词

原文：growth

批改：结合语境，前面补充economic更恰当

原文：traveling

批改：choose to do sth为固定搭配，应该为to travel

原文：spring festival

批改：大写

原文：era

批改：句子比较长，建议后面加个逗号

原文：he core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of the changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive rapid growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing people to afford new year gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of individuals choose traveling in spring festival vacation rather than staying at home.

批改：从经济增长和消费追求两方面分析图表中的现象，注意个别语法问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of individuals, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：表达个人观点，语言通顺

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

题目要求：对图表信息描绘全面准确，个人观点及论述内容切题；

语言表达：全文用了较多经典句式，但也有较多语法错误，表达水平有待提高。练习阶段可以尝试用自己的语言表达，锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段详细论述，第三段表达个人观点，整体架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；继续多多积累经典句式；加强语法练习；

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