考研英语一2013年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2013年大作文题目

考研英语一2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2013年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are some graduates, standing at the crossroad of their life and facing four different choices, which are hunting for a job, preparing for examination, going abroad and inventing a company by oneself. Eridently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is choosing the best way in our life that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, choosing the best way in our life has become a key factor that distinguishes exceptional individaals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. On the other hand, failing choose a best way in life is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.

In brief, choosing the best way in our life is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we fulfill our aspirations.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Eridently

批改：evidently

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are some graduates, standing at the crossroad of their life and facing four different choices, which are hunting for a job, preparing for examination, going abroad and inventing a company by oneself. Eridently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is choosing the best way in our life that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：能够清晰全面的描绘出图画中展示的内容并点明主题，句子结构连贯。

批改：逗号

原文：individaals

批改：individuals

批改：加to，fail to do sth

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, in modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, choosing the best way in our life has become a key factor that distinguishes exceptional individaals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident. On the other hand, failing choose a best way in life is like a heavy chain that hinders children"s progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life and preventing them from shining brightly in future society.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：In brief, choosing the best way in our life is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we fulfill our aspirations.

批改：起到了呼吁和号召的作用，紧扣主题，语言连贯完整。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯，要正确使用标点断句；语法方面，注意一句话只能有一个谓语。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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