2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2011年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二大作文话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts some Brands Market of china Automobile Market. In 2008, the percentage of automobile made in china was approximately 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japan Brand experienced a significant decline of about 10%

during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of Ameria Brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation are accustomed to using domestic automobile and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and

profound transformation. In my opinion, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s manufacturing industry is responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of china"s Brand automobile is a clear sign of social improvement and will

steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japan"s Brand will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：some Brands Market of china Automobile Market

批改：表达很不地道，可以修改为the market share distribution of different car brands in China

原文：during the same period. Simultaneously,

批改：这两个词同一个意思，只保留一个就可以

原文：Ameria Brand

批改：【拼写错误】American brands

原文：chinese

批改：C要大写

原文：what

批改：W要大写

原文：china

批改：C要大写

原文：c

批改：C要大写

原文：is responding to

批改：in responding to

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1.题目要求：文章很好地完成了题目要求。第一段清晰地描述了图表变化趋势。第二段提供了原因分析，第三段展望了未来。结构完整，内容切题。

2.语言表达：文章中有一些语法漏洞需要留意，已在文章批改中标明。

3.行文逻辑：文章结构清晰，先描述数据变化，再探讨原因，最后预测未来趋势，符合常见的图表作文写作逻辑。

4.建议：建议同学写作完成后，一定要通篇读一遍，这个过程重点抓语法和拼写错误，这种不必要的问题一定要扼杀掉。另外坚持背诵锦囊句，多练习积累手感和语感，一定要坚持自己写作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。继续加油(ง •_•)ง，相信你一定能成功，Go Go!

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