2021年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2021年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2021年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2021年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2021年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts that the survey on exercising ways of residents in a certain city. Exercising alone takes the lead at 54.3%, followed by exercising with friends at 47.7%. Additionally, factors such as exercising with family, team sports, are also considered, accounting for 23.9%, 15.8%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the saying goes,"On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students and adults are compelled to confront immense academic pressure and economic pressure, and as a result, building body alone has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to exercising alone or exercising with friends and have become the primary group.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of peoples,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：that

批改：that 引导的从句中没有动词，所以直接删除 that ，depict 后面接名词性短语

原文：building body

批改：building body 用词不够准确，改为 exercising

原文：peoples,

批改：people是集体名词，本身就是复数形式，没有 peoples这个形式

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析很好，内容详实，丰富具体；

从语言层面看，语法上有点小错误，从句的结构也得完整 ，不能缺少成分，集合名词的用法。

建议：积累范文，从范文中掌握一些语法常识，然后 尽量去替换其中的单词和短语，形成自己的语言风格，加油！

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