2019年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2019年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduate in a certain university in 2013 and 2018. In 2013, the percentage of employment was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the percentage of enter the next higher school experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of carve out remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, educational background is dispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has mad tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enable university students to have ample opportunities for further education. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the percentage of enter the next higher school will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of carve out

will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduate in a certain university in 2013 and 2018.

批改：“graduate”应改为复数形式“graduates”，表达“毕业生们”更准确

原文：In 2013, the percentage of employment was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decreased to 60.7%.

批改：此句描述清晰，准确呈现了2013年到2018年就业比例的变化情况。

原文：In contrast, the percentage of enter the next higher school experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same period.

批改：“the percentage of enter”表述错误，应改为“the percentage of those entering”

原文：Simultaneously, the percentage of carve out remained stable and steady.

批改：“carve out”使用错误，应改为“starting a business”

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

批改：此句起到承上启下作用，引出下文对现象原因的分析，表述恰当

原文：To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, educational background is dispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.

批改：“dispensable”使用错误，结合语境这里想说教育背景是必不可少的，应改为“indispensable”。

原文：In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has mad tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enable university students to have ample opportunities for further education.

批改：“has mad”拼写错误，应改为“has made”；“enable”前缺少连词“and”，导致句子结构混乱。

原文：Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：此句总结前文，逻辑合理，表达清晰。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the percentage of enter the next higher school will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：“the percentage of enter”错误同第一段，应改为“the percentage of those entering”。

原文： In contrast, the proportion of carve out will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

批改：“carve out”错误同第一段，应改为“starting a business”

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

题目要求：作文基本围绕图表中2013与2018年某大学毕业生不同选择的比例变化展开，尝试解读数据并分析原因、预测趋势，在核心任务上有一定遵循。

语言表达：部分语句表意较为清晰，例如“The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduate in a certain university in 2013 and 2018.”虽存在语法错误，但能看出试图清晰引出图表内容；“The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.”起到了较好的承上启下作用，使文章结构上有一定连贯性。

内容层面：对图表内容有一定解读，描述了2013 - 2018年就业、升学比例的变化情况，并尝试分析原因，提及现代社会变化、年轻人观念以及政府努力等因素，还对未来趋势进行了预测，内容框架较为完整。

修改建议：检查文章整体连贯性，合理运用连接词和过渡语，使句子和段落之间过渡自然流畅，提升文章整体质量。

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