2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

启航教育在考研英语写作教学中反复强调：词汇与句式的高级化是考研英语作文高分的关键。本文整理的2014年考研英语二批改范例，几乎每一段都包含高分替换词与衔接词，是考研英语二真题写作锦囊中的代表性范文。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban and rural populations in China past 20 years.In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million but by 2010 this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast the number of rural population experienced is show decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction, they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. That is why an increasing number of people choose to work in urban. In addition, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urban system, enabling cities to have more people. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： but

批改：前面加个逗号

原文：the

批改：前面加个逗号

原文：is show

批改：a slow

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban and rural populations in China past 20 years.In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million but by 2010 this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast the number of rural population experienced is show decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：意思对，注意标点和语法错误

原文：,

批改：此处用句号，或者加and并列

原文：in urban

批改：urban是形容词，改为 in cities

原文： a sound urban system, enabling cities to have more people

批改：这里太中式了，a sound infrastructure, public services, and employment system, enhancing cities’ capacity to absorb rural residents.

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction, they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. That is why an increasing number of people choose to work in urban. In addition, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urban system, enabling cities to have more people. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：本段第二点稍微欠缺说服力，已经给出参考建议

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：预测趋势，呼应主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，注意拼写和语法错误；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，介词短语，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

4. 建议：第二段已经能利用老师的模板，要不断使用自己的语言，灵活运用在各类题目中，进一步丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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