2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2014年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二作文模板话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chat clearly depicts the change that people who live in the city and country during 20 years.In 1990, the number of citizens who live in the city was 300, but by 2010 , this figure has gradually risen to 666. In contrast ,the number of citizen who live in the country experienced a slow decline of 200 from 1990 to 2010.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, all of us know that there are many advanced technologies, medical care and education are all concentrated in cities. So a lot of people have their plans to remove .In addition, people have a ability to make their life better and no longer need to rely on farming for living. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the changes of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：300

批改：单位是million 百万

原文：666

批改：million

原文：200

批改：million

原文：citizen

批改：citizens 复数形式

原文： pie chat clearly depicts the change that people who live in the city and country during 20 years.In 1990, the number of citizens who live in the city was 300, but by 2010 , this figure has gradually risen to 666. In contrast ,the number of citizen who live in the country experienced a slow decline of 200 from 1990 to 2010.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：are all

批改：删除

原文：a

批改：删除

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, all of us know that there are many advanced technologies, medical care and education are all concentrated in cities. So a lot of people have their plans to remove .In addition, people have a ability to make their life better and no longer need to rely on farming for living. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

原文：hat about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the changes of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

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